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Pirate Rabbit

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This beautiful lineart was done by
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I had alot of fun doing this, the way amy has drew this really gave this character edge and definitely " Dont mess with me " feeling

Total time: 7 hours
Layers: 67
Each layer has 0 bleeds


Has to be the most enjoyable artwork ive done


Id love to hear feedback as im trying to improve my work throughout, I would personally think I need to improve on colouring of eyes. also doing shades and highlights to reduce the image being 'flat' so any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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To add more dimension to the coloring, you should definitely try to add more shades within the shadows, in addition to making them stronger. Realistic shadows have many varying values to them, not simply one, so I think that adding more layers of shadow could help bring a more realistic gradient.Keep in mind your light source and the shape of the piece the light is falling to. Finally, I think that adding textures would help you avoid the issue of everything appearing to be made of the same somewhat-plasticy material. :3

About the eyes in particular, I'd suggest adding some shadows to the whites of the eyes. They're almost never stark white, and will have at least a little shading at the corners and below the upper eyelid.

Hope I was able to help~